Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02
review-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02-genart-lc-dupont-2013-09-30-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-09-24 | |
| Requested | 2013-09-12 | |
| Authors | Ali Begen, Yiqun Cai, Heidi Ou | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-09-30 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Francis Dupont
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Radia Perlman (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02-genart-lc-dupont-2013-09-30 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 02 (document currently at 03) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2013-09-30 |
Review
review-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02-genart-lc-dupont-2013-09-30
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20130925 IETF LC End Date: 20130924 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 7 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 3 page 4: "Figure 1" (which should be in the same page than the "figure") is not a figure... Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr