Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02
review-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02-genart-lc-dupont-2013-09-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-09-24
Requested 2013-09-12
Authors Ali Begen, Yiqun Cai, Heidi Ou
Draft last updated 2013-09-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02-genart-lc-dupont-2013-09-30
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-09-30

Review
review-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02-genart-lc-dupont-2013-09-30

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-delayed-duplication-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20130925
IETF LC End Date: 20130924
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2 and 7 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 3 page 4: "Figure 1" (which should be in the same page than the "figure")
  is not a figure...

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr