Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lwig-terminology-04
review-ietf-lwig-terminology-04-secdir-lc-laurie-2013-05-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lwig-terminology
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2013-06-05
Requested 2013-05-23
Draft last updated 2013-05-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Ben Laurie (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ben Laurie
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lwig-terminology-04-secdir-lc-laurie-2013-05-30
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 07)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-05-30

Review
review-ietf-lwig-terminology-04-secdir-lc-laurie-2013-05-30

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Status: Ready with nits.

This document discusses networks comprised of constrained nodes (i.e.
nodes with limited power, CPU, storage, etc.). It does cover whether
various classes of nodes can participate in secure networks, which is
good, but the Security Considerations section is empty - I would
suggest that this section could usefully contain a summary of the
security implications of the various constraints discussed.