Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24
review-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24-genart-telechat-resnick-2019-02-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-02-05
Requested 2019-01-24
Draft last updated 2019-02-05
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -13 by Colin Perkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -15 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -24 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Pete Resnick
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24-genart-telechat-resnick-2019-02-05
Reviewed rev. 24 (document currently at 25)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-02-05

Review
review-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24-genart-telechat-resnick-2019-02-05

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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2019-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-31
IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07

Summary:

The changes made to this version look fine to me. No concerns save the editorial comment below.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last paragraph.