Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16

Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 33)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-09-11
Requested 2018-08-28
Authors Dino Farinacci, Vince Fuller, David Meyer, Darrel Lewis, Albert Cabellos-Aparicio
Draft last updated 2018-09-12
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -14 by John Drake (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -16 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -15 by Brian Trammell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -16 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -19 by Brian Trammell (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -18 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16-genart-telechat-dupont-2018-09-12
Reviewed rev. 16 (document currently at 33)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-09-12


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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-??
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2018-09-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-27

Summary: Ready with Nits

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 I have a few concerns about wording (e.g. things too hard to understand). I'll send a more complete message before the end of the week in the case they are not solved in version 17 I didn't read yet.