Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-03-03
Requested 2015-02-12
Authors Albert Cabellos-Aparicio, Damien Saucez
Draft last updated 2015-04-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by David Black (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Alexey Melnikov
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lisp-introduction-12-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-04-08


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    Document:  draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-11

    Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov

    Review Date: 2015-02-11

    IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-04

    IESG Telechat date: 2015-03-05

    Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational

    Thank you for writing this document, I quite enjoyed reading it.

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    Nits/editorial comments:

In A.1:

>LISP, as initially conceived, had a number of potential operating
   modes, named ’models’.  Although they are note

Typo: not

>used anymore, one
   occasionally sees mention of them, so they are briefly described