Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-10
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-10-opsdir-lc-black-2015-02-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-03-03
Requested 2015-01-31
Authors Albert Cabellos-Aparicio, Damien Saucez
Draft last updated 2015-02-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by David Black (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Black
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lisp-introduction-10-opsdir-lc-black-2015-02-17
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-02-17

Review
review-ietf-lisp-introduction-10-opsdir-lc-black-2015-02-17






Hi Albert,




 




>


We have posted an updated version of draft-lisp-introduction hopefully addressing all the comments besides UDP Zero.




 




I’ve scanned the diff wrt the -11 version, and it does look like all the comments have been addressed besides the one on UDP zero checksums for IPv6.  I’m going to walk
 away from that comment, as there is some rationale for that design decision in the existing draft text, and moreover, the primary responsibility for that explanation falls on the LISP protocol RFCs that have already been approved by the IESG.




 




Hence, I think this -12 version of the introduction draft is good to go. Thank you to you and the other authors for addressing the comments in a thorough fashion and for
 doing so even though they arrived after the conclusion of IETF Last Call on this draft.







 




Regards,


--David







 













From:

 Albert Cabellos [mailto:albert.cabellos at gmail.com]





Sent:

 Tuesday, February 17, 2015 7:28 PM




To:

 ops-dir at ietf.org; Black, David; lisp at ietf.org




Cc:

 Damien Saucez; Luigi Iannone; Joel Halpern; Brian Haberman




Subject:

 Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt










 







Hi all







 










We have posted an updated version of draft-lisp-introduction hopefully addressing all the comments besides UDP Zero.










 










Please let us know if this is not the case.










 










Kind Regards










 










Albert










 













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Date: Wed, Feb 18, 2015 at 1:17 AM


Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt


To: Damien Saucez <

damien.saucez at inria.fr

>, Albert Cabellos-Aparicio <

acabello at ac.upc.edu

>











A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt


has been successfully submitted by Albert Cabellos and posted to the


IETF repository.





Name:           draft-ietf-lisp-introduction


Revision:       12


Title:          An Architectural Introduction to the Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP)


Document date:  2015-02-17


Group:          lisp


Pages:          28


URL:            


http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt


Status:         

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction/


Htmlized:       

http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12


Diff:           

http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12





Abstract:


   This document describes the architecture of the Locator/ID Separation


   Protocol (LISP), making it easier to read the rest of the LISP


   specifications and providing a basis for discussion about the details


   of the LISP protocols.  This document is used for introductory


   purposes, more details can be found in RFC6830, the protocol


   specification.














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