Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis-07
review-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis-07-genart-lc-schinazi-2018-04-26-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-04-27 | |
| Requested | 2018-04-13 | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-04-26 | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Zitao Wang
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Genart Last Call review of -07 by David Schinazi (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Daniel Migault (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Daniel Migault (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | David Schinazi |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis-07-genart-lc-schinazi-2018-04-26 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 07 (document currently at 12) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2018-04-26 |
Review
review-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis-07-genart-lc-schinazi-2018-04-26
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5751-bis-07 Reviewer: David Schinazi Review Date: 2018-04-26 IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-27 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is clearly written and does a nice job of explaining the rationale and historical context of the decisions it made. Major issues: None noticed during this review Minor issues: I was slightly confused by the description of AuthEnvelopedData in 2.4.4: it seems to describe data protected by a symmetric AEAD but then mentions asymmetric keys. But this could be due to my lack of expertise in S/MIME. Nits/editorial comments: I believe the RFC2119 reference should also mention RFC8174.