Telechat Review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-lager-specification
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-04-19
Requested 2016-04-12
Authors Kim Davies, Asmus Freytag
Draft last updated 2016-04-20
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -10 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ralph Droms 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-lager-specification-11-genart-telechat-droms-2016-04-20
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-04-20


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Document: draft-ietf-lager-specification-11

Reviewer: Ralph Droms

Review Date: 2016-04-19

IETF LC End Date: 2016-04-11

IESG Telechat date: (if known) 2016-04-21


 This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: While this document is long and detailed, I found it to be clear and well-written.  I can't say I fully understand all the details and nuances after my review, but I'm confident that an implementor could gain the necessary understanding from careful reading of the document.  I did find what I considered to be a couple of small typos, which I'm confident the RFC Editor will find and correct if necessary.




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