Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14
review-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14-tsvdir-lc-black-2013-09-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Directorate (tsvdir)
Deadline 2013-09-23
Requested 2013-09-10
Authors Chaitanya Kodeboniya, Rahul Aggarwal, Yakov Rekhter, Yuji Kamite, Luyuan Fang
Draft last updated 2013-09-24
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -15 by Wassim Haddad (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Tsvdir Last Call review of -14 by David Black (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Black
State Completed
Review review-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14-tsvdir-lc-black-2013-09-24
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-09-24

Review
review-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14-tsvdir-lc-black-2013-09-24

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Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-mcast-14
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: September 23, 2012
IETF LC End Date: September 23, 2012

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
	should be fixed before publication.

This draft describes multicast optimizations for VPLS via use of MPLS
multicast distribution trees within the service provider (SP) network.

In general, the techniques in this draft are an improvement, as they
should typically result in reduction of SP network traffic required
to carry the same level of multicast traffic originating from the VPLS
edges.  I have reviewed primarily for transport-related topics; while
I don't have the expertise to review for MPLS and VPLS concerns, I'm
confident in the expertise of this author team in those technologies. 

I found a couple of items that are effectively editorial:

(1) The techniques in this draft appear to add an MPLS label to the
stack in order to identify the MPLS multicast tree.  Does that added
label raise any MTU concerns in practice?

(2) Two techniques used by this draft - replication of traffic within
a multicast tree, and flooding of traffic (section 14) - could be
employed as traffic amplifiers in denial of service attacks.  A short
discussion of this possibility and the applicability of countermeasures
described in this draft, RFC 4761 and/or RFC 4762 would be good to
add to the security considerations section.

Thanks,
--David
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