Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-03

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-03-15
Requested 2017-02-27
Authors Greg Mirsky, Israel Meilik
Draft last updated 2017-03-02
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Jon Mitchell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Chris Lonvick (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-03-genart-lc-halpern-2017-03-02
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-03-02


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Document: draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-time-format-??
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-03-02
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-15
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat


Major issues:

Minor issues:
    The wording of the behavioral requirements for signaling in section 2.1 is atypical for IETF documents (and in my view makes it harder for the reader to follow.)  The rules are listed as separate rules, but they are actually sequential steps that must be test in order, exiting the process if the condition for each step is met.  But it does not actually say that.  

Nits/editorial comments: 
    Section 2.3 refers to this as a proposal.  It is a specification, not a proposal.  Please reword.