Last Call Review of draft-ietf-intarea-provisioning-domains-09

Request Review of draft-ietf-intarea-provisioning-domains
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-12-25
Requested 2019-12-11
Authors Pierre Pfister, √Čric Vyncke, Tommy Pauly, David Schinazi, Wenqin Shao
Draft last updated 2019-12-27
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -01 by Zhen Cao (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -01 by Tim Chown (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -09 by Russ White (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -09 by Martin Duke (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-intarea-provisioning-domains-09-genart-lc-dupont-2019-12-27
Posted at
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-12-27


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Document: draft-ietf-intarea-provisioning-domains-09.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20191220
IETF LC End Date: 20191225
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - 3.1 page 6: the real purpose of the R-flag / inclusion of a RA header
  could be explained before examples of section 5, for instance in the

 - 3.4 page 10,3.4.3 page 11 (3 times) and 6 page 22 : e.g. -> e.g.,

 - 4.4 page 17: I understand the text about the Subject Name (so it
  is not a minor issue) but RFC 5280 defines the Subject as a X.500
  Distinguished Name so IMHO you mean the Subject Alternative Name.
  I propose to add "(Alternative)" between "Subject" and "Name" so
  the text should become fully correct without introducing extra /
  spurious details.

 - 8.3 page 24: Bit position 0, 1 and 2 are reserved -> assigned

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