Last Call Review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15
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Request Review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-07-04
Requested 2019-06-20
Authors Ron Bonica, Fred Baker, Geoff Huston, Bob Hinden, Ole Trøan, Fernando Gont
Draft last updated 2019-08-22
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -10 by Tim Chown (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -09 by Gorry Fairhurst (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -12 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Zitao Wang
State Completed
Review review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-08-22
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/_1pzUKCr_RcNalzUrPxAuorIGKw
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-08-22

Review
review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-08-22

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
Summary: 
This document describes IP fragmentation and explains how it introduces fragility to Internet communication. It also proposes alternatives to IP fragmentation and provides recommendations for developers and network operators.
This document is ready from an Ops Directorate viewpoint.

Best Regards!
-Michael