Last Call Review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-12
review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-12-rtgdir-lc-venaas-2019-07-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2019-07-19
Requested 2019-06-21
Requested by Alvaro Retana
Authors Ron Bonica, Fred Baker, Geoff Huston, Bob Hinden, Ole Trøan, Fernando Gont
Draft last updated 2019-07-21
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -10 by Tim Chown (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -09 by Gorry Fairhurst (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -12 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Comments
Focus on any potential impact to work in the RTG area.  Thanks!
Assignment Reviewer Stig Venaas
State Completed
Review review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-12-rtgdir-lc-venaas-2019-07-21
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/0AOficFuFat78XZ7WMH5J8YR-Bc
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-07-21

Review
review-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-12-rtgdir-lc-venaas-2019-07-21

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this
draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or
routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG
review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is
to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about
the Routing Directorate, please see
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs,
it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other
IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them
through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile-15.txt
Reviewer: Stig Venaas
Review Date: 19 July 2019
IETF LC End Date: 19 July 2019
Intended Status: Best Current Practice

Summary:
No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:
The document is in great shape. It is easy to read and of good quality.

Major Issues:
No major issues found.

Minor Issues:
No minor issues found.

Nits:
I noticed that in section 2.1 the word "While" is spelled "Whlie".

Regards,
Stig