Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-
review-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-genart-lc-barnes-2011-11-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-12-12
Requested 2011-11-29
Draft last updated 2011-11-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Mary Barnes
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Warren Kumari
Assignment Reviewer Mary Barnes
State Completed
Review review-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-genart-lc-barnes-2011-11-30
Review completed: 2011-11-30

Review
review-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-genart-lc-barnes-2011-11-30

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-fsm-subcode-02
Reviewer:  Mary Barnes
Review Date:  30 November 2011
IETF LC End Date:  12 December 2011

Summary:  Ready with nits

Nits:
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- There are articles (e.g., "the") missing in quite a few of the
sentences, however, the RFC editor should be able to easily fix those.