Last Call Review of draft-ietf-idr-as-private-reservation-03

Request Review of draft-ietf-idr-as-private-reservation
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-02-22
Requested 2013-02-14
Authors Jon Mitchell
Draft last updated 2013-02-27
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Sam Hartman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn Davies
State Completed
Review review-ietf-idr-as-private-reservation-03-genart-lc-davies-2013-02-27
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-02-27


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Document: draft-ietf-idr-as-private-reservation-03.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 15 February 2013
IETF LC End Date: 22 February 2013
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -

Summary: Ready for the IESG.

Nits/editorial comments:  The draft is not actually definitive about 

range of values to be allocated - the range in s10 is just a 

'suggestion'.  Who is actually making the decision about the range?

Aside: I noted that the highest possible 32 bit number (4294967295 = 

0xFFFFFFFF) is excluded from the proposed range.  This is marked as 

reserved in the IANA table but AFAICS this reserved item does not have a 

specification associated with the reservation.  This document would be 

an opportunity to explicitly mention that the topmost value is reserved 

(for future expansion? :-) )