Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-07-25
IETF LC End Date: 2016-12-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: Ready with a few minor English nits remaining.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
I notice that a number of the editorial comments in
were not addressed, but I am sure the RFC Editor will pick them up.
I notice that RFC7952 is in the reference list but not called out in the text.