Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-13

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-11
Requested 2017-11-27
Authors Alexander Clemm, Jan Medved, Robert Varga, Xufeng Liu, Hariharan Ananthakrishnan, Nitin Bahadur
Draft last updated 2017-12-01
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Tony Przygienda (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Carl Moberg (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -10 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -10 by Ladislav Lhotka (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -10 by Michael Richardson (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-13-genart-lc-kyzivat-2017-12-01
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2017-12-01


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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-13
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2017-12-01
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-11
IESG Telechat date: TBD


This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.


I conducted this review without any knowledge of YANG modeling. So the 
sort of review I can do is superficial.


Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  2

(1) NIT: Section 1 - Language

s/example model is/an example model is/
s/full-blown OSPF model/a complete OSPF model/
s/augments general network/augments the general network/

(2) NIT: Section 4 - typo

Something is wrong with:

    The YANG modules ietf-network and ietf-network are designed to be
    used in conjunction with implementations that support the Network

Did you perhaps mean:

    The YANG modules ietf-network and ietf-network-topology are ...