Last Call Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-traceability-08

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2rs-traceability
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-04-29
Requested 2016-04-21
Authors Joe Clarke, Gonzalo Salgueiro, Carlos Pignataro
Draft last updated 2016-05-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Mach Chen (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Les Ginsberg (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Watson Ladd
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2rs-traceability-08-secdir-lc-ladd-2016-05-05
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-05-05


Dear all,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

In my opinion the document is ready. It describes what data should be logged.

While the security considerations section mentions the privacy impact
of the data in the logs, it doesn't mention the value of the
information in the logs for event reconstruction, which is mentioned
in the text. I don't see a lot of space for problems here, but maybe I
didn't see them.

Watson Ladd