Telechat Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08
review-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08-opsdir-telechat-martinez-2017-10-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-framework
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-10-24
Requested 2017-10-02
Authors Diego Lopez, Edward Lopez, Linda Dunbar, John Strassner, Rakesh Kumar
Draft last updated 2017-10-23
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -08 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Carlos Martínez (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Daniel Franke (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos Martínez
State Completed
Review review-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08-opsdir-telechat-martinez-2017-10-23
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-10-23

Review
review-ietf-i2nsf-framework-08-opsdir-telechat-martinez-2017-10-23

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These 
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the 
IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews 
during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments 
just like any other last call comments. 

Overall I've found this document to be READY. I do believe that some parts' readability could be improved however, particularly Section 5. This section describes some principles a potential implementation of the spec should follow but provides little or no justification for them. I believe additional text could help.

Thank you to the authors for their great work!

Carlos