Last Call Review of draft-ietf-homenet-dncp-07
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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-07-29
IETF LC End Date: 2015-07-29
IESG Telechat date: NA
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments .
"uses Trickle"---->"uses the Trickle algorithm"
"DNCP is an abstract protocol, that"---->"DNCP is an abstract protocol, and"
-[Page 3], Intro, last paragraph the terms "infrequently" and "As the network of nodes, or the rate of data changes grows over a given time interval"
it would be good to give example values or ranges to better describe what is meant by these terms.
-[Page 3], "specifies transport method"---->"specifies the transport method"
-[Page 10], "higher then"---->"higher than"
-[Page 28], "Certifcate"---->"Certificate"
-Please consider adding caption and title to all figures.