Telechat Review of draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11
review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-03-26
Requested 2013-03-21
Authors Weiming Wang, Evangelos Haleplidis, Kentaro Ogawa, Chuanhuang Li, Joel Halpern
Draft last updated 2013-03-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 12)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-03-23

Review
review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23






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Document: draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2013-03-23




IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-11




IESG Telechat date: 2013-03-28




 




Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard, but I have a comment.




 




Editorial comment:




Section 11, the following sentence can be written :




"The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security mechanisms and which implementations are required to support, and which deployments can use to meet these needs.  "





Suggestion:




"The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security mechanisms that implementations are required to support to meet these needs."




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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