Telechat Review of draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11
review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-03-26 | |
| Requested | 2013-03-21 | |
| Authors | Weiming Wang, Evangelos Haleplidis, Kentaro Ogawa, Chuanhuang Li, Joel Halpern | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-03-23 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Telechat review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Derek Atkins (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2013-03-23 |
Review
review-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-23
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-forces-lfb-lib-11 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-03-23 IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-11 IESG Telechat date: 2013-03-28 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard, but I have a comment. Editorial comment: Section 11, the following sentence can be written : "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security mechanisms and which implementations are required to support, and which deployments can use to meet these needs. " Suggestion: "The ForCES protocol document [RFC5810] includes a comprehensive set of security mechanisms that implementations are required to support to meet these needs." Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com