Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03
review-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-12-04-3-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-12-02
Requested 2019-11-18
Authors St├ęphane Bortzmeyer, Sara Dickinson
Draft last updated 2019-12-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -03 by Brian Trammell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-12-04-3
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/RQyIwUyCT9jM2vUrQYqALUOOIwI
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2019-12-04

Review
review-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-12-04-3

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-03

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC with some issues (I would recommend taking into consideration the comments received on the mailing list)

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
It would have been interesting to have this draft also mention the additional/potential risks for non-web applications. IoT was briefly mentioned in Section 3.6. What about other applications? Is there any other privacy risks beyond just identifying the content being requested?

Very interesting topic.

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
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