Telechat Review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13

Request Review of draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-08-14
Requested 2018-08-08
Authors Paul Hoffman, Patrick McManus
Draft last updated 2018-08-14
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -12 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -13 by Fernando Gont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -13 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Review review-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13-genart-telechat-bryant-2018-08-14
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-08-14


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Document: draft-ietf-doh-dns-over-https-13
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2018-08-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-08
IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-16


This is useful work, it is well written  and is ready for publication

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

I accept that I am going to be in the rough, but I do not like the term "on the wire". 

My recollection from my hardware days is that the output shift register sends the data in such a way that if I were to put an oscilloscope on the wire, the bit patterns would not match those shown in this text. What I think are presented in the text are raw RFC1035 messages in network byte order.