Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-02-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-02-12
Requested 2020-01-29
Authors Christian Huitema, Daniel Kaiser
Draft last updated 2020-02-10
Completed reviews Iotdir Last Call review of -04 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -04 by Bob Halley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-02-10
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/XmDHoh1e4Al2xbgiSKXQE0jqdWs
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-02-10

Review
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-02-10

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

In general, this document is clear to me. I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. The problems and requirements are well discussed in this informational document.

There are some obvious nits. For example, the number of the items in section 4.1 and 4.2.