Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-intdir-lc-halley-2020-01-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2020-02-12
Requested 2020-01-29
Requested by √Čric Vyncke
Authors Christian Huitema, Daniel Kaiser
Draft last updated 2020-01-30
Completed reviews Iotdir Last Call review of -04 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -04 by Bob Halley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bob Halley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-intdir-lc-halley-2020-01-30
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/bqFRbPqlT8gkqFAkzgSBbvHm4iM
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-01-30

Review
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-intdir-lc-halley-2020-01-30

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html.

The draft does a very good job explaining the problem space and its complexities.  The guidance it offers for future extensions is sound.

/Bob

P.S. I liked the ASCII art.