Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06
review-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06-genart-lc-korhonen-2020-01-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-01-21
Requested 2020-01-07
Authors Francis Dupont, Stephen Morris, Paul Vixie, Donald Eastlake, Ólafur Guðmundsson, Brian Wellington
Draft last updated 2020-01-21
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06-genart-lc-korhonen-2020-01-21
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/2JXdNHfkD_G2SDIuNruixi6L7bE
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-01-21

Review
review-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-06-genart-lc-korhonen-2020-01-21

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2020-01-21
IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-21
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document was well written and easy read. I found no complaints. There are bogus IDNits warnings for "non-RFC2606-compliant FQDNs".

Major issues:

None.

Minor issues:

None.

Nits/editorial comments:

1) The sentence in lines 248-250 was hard to parse in the first few reads. I suggest rewording... somehow. It was like this in RFC2845 already, though.

248	               If hosts A.site.example and B.example.net share a key,
249	         possibilities for the key name include <id>.A.site.example,
250	         <id>.B.example.net, and <id>.A.site.example.B.example.net.