Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-09-25
Requested 2018-09-11
Authors Lee Howard
Draft last updated 2018-09-27
Completed reviews Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Derek Atkins
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-isp-ip6rdns-06-secdir-telechat-atkins-2018-09-27
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-09-27



I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving
security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts.  Comments
not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the
IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.


* Ready to Publish


* There is an extra (spurious) reference to RFC1912 at the end of
  section 1.2, where it says: [RFC1912] This document considers.  I
  suspect this extra reference should be removed.


       Derek Atkins                 617-623-3745   
       Computer and Internet Security Consultant