Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
review-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13-genart-lc-kyzivat-2019-10-12-00
Review
review-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13-genart-lc-kyzivat-2019-10-12
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Document: draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-13
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2019-10-12
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
be fixed before publication.
General:
I found that I lack the subject matter expertise to meaningfully review
this document. I read it carefully, along with one of the references.
But it appeared that I would need to internalize quite a number of other
references before it would be possible to really follow this.
I did review it for form - the document is well written. (Most documents
that I review have at least a few problems with form.)
IdNits returns a couple of outdated references that should be cleaned up:
== Outdated reference: A later version (-18) exists of
draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-17
== Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of
draft-ietf-rtgwg-atn-bgp-01
I have no other comments.