Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dmm-4283mnids-04
review-ietf-dmm-4283mnids-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-03-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dmm-4283mnids
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-02-07
Requested 2017-01-24
Draft last updated 2017-03-01
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -03 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Dale Worley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Joseph Salowey (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dmm-4283mnids-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-03-01
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-03-01

Review
review-ietf-dmm-4283mnids-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-03-01

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

 

I think the document is written very clear, it doesn’t create any operational issues to network.

 

However, I am a bit surprised that the draft is “standard track”.

The draft describes the acronyms and the RFCs where they are described. The draft should be “informational”.

 

 

Linda Dunbar