Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-
review-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-genart-lc-even-2012-01-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-01-03
Requested 2011-12-30
Authors Kim Kinnear, Mark Stapp, Richard Johnson
Draft last updated 2012-01-01
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Roni Even
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by David Harrington
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-genart-lc-even-2012-01-01
Review completed: 2012-01-01

Review
review-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-genart-lc-even-2012-01-01

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: 

draft-ietf-dhc-vpn-option-14

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2012–1–1

IETF LC End Date: 2012–1–4

IESG Telechat date:  2012-1-5

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard  RFC.  

 

Major issues:

 

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:  

 

1.

       

In section 3.2 “

Type and VSS Information -- see Section 35” should be 3.5

2.

       

In section 3.3 “

This sub-option only only” 

3.

       

In 3.5 last bullet not clear - “and the length of the MUST be 1.”