Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-09
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-09-secdir-telechat-sheffer-2016-08-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-08-02
Requested 2016-07-14
Draft last updated 2016-08-04
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -08 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Yaron Sheffer
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Russ White (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Yaron Sheffer
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-09-secdir-telechat-sheffer-2016-08-04
Reviewed rev. 09
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-08-04

Review
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-09-secdir-telechat-sheffer-2016-08-04

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes current practices for configuring DHCP in
complex network scenarios, where the goal is to allow servers to
configure DHCP clients differently depending on the client's network
location.

Summary

The document is ready for publication.

Details

My previous SecDir review of -08 lamented the then short and essentially
useless Security Considerations section. This section has now been
significantly extended and as far as I can determine, is now at an
appropriate level for this draft.

I would like to thank the authors for addressing my comments!