Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07-opsdir-lc-banks-2016-06-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-topo-conf
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-05-23
Requested 2016-05-09
Draft last updated 2016-06-02
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -08 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Yaron Sheffer
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Russ White (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07-opsdir-lc-banks-2016-06-02
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-06-02

Review
review-ietf-dhc-topo-conf-07-opsdir-lc-banks-2016-06-02

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Document: draft-lemon-dhc-topo-conf

Summary: An informational draft describing how DHCP servers are deployed/used "today", which extends beyond the information that's  described in the  DHCPv4/DHCPv6 RFCs themselves.

Status: Ready

This draft is well written, straight forward, and ready for publication. 

Thanks
Sarah