Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11
review-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11-genart-lc-campbell-2013-01-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-07
Requested 2013-01-03
Draft last updated 2013-01-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Ben Campbell (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Dan Harkins
Assignment Reviewer Ben Campbell
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11-genart-lc-campbell-2013-01-03
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-01-03

Review
review-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11-genart-lc-campbell-2013-01-03

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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-relay-id-suboption-11
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-01-03
IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10

Summary:  Ready for publication as a proposed standard.

Note: This review is incremental to my previous Gen-ART review at IETF last call. The only substantive comment from that review has been addressed in discussion. There are two remaining trivial editorial comments that the authors have agreed to address. Since there has not been an update since that previous review, I am including them for the sake of documentation. ** Nothing there is important enough to delay publication. **

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

[section copied from previous review]

> -- section 5, last paragraph:
> 
> I suggest removing the scare quotes around "stability". If there are concerns about whether such stability is real, it would be better to say that directly.
> 
> -- informative references:
> 
> draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv4-bulk-leasequery-06 is now 07