Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-03
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-03-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2017-01-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-01-19
Requested 2017-01-05
Draft last updated 2017-01-16
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -03 by Carlos Bernardos (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-03-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2017-01-16
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-01-16

Review
review-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-03-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2017-01-16

This document is in great shape, and I do not see any missing operational considerations. Defaults are appropriately defined.

I will note that there is a response at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/zJ147M2VjQxTCOyRT7OQ42NYzco that states that additional figures are forthcoming. I think those will help (although I am biased as a visual person), and would encourage the new revision to be posted sooner rather than later.

Thanks,

-- Carlos.