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Request Review of draft-ietf-dane-protocol
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-04-25
Requested 2012-04-12
Draft last updated 2012-04-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Miguel García
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Assignment Reviewer Miguel García
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Review review-ietf-dane-protocol-genart-lc-garcia-2012-04-24
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Review completed: 2012-04-24

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Document: draft-ietf-dane-protocol-19.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 23-Apr-2012
IETF LC End Date: 25-Apr-2012
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Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:



The document is well written and I have no problems with it. Perhaps the 


IANA Considerations section can be improved by having clear instructions 


to IANA, especially on the registry they need to operate.




For example, take a look at the text on Section 7.1:

"This document uses a new DNS RR type, TLSA, whose value is TBD. "



I have a problem with the word "uses". It is not clear if IANA has to 


allocate a value or the document uses an existing value. Assuming IANA 


has to allocate an existing value, please indicate the registry where 


that value should be allocated. For example, the text could say:






This document request IANA to allocate a new "TLSA" value in the Resource 


Record (RR) TYPEs subregistry of the Domain Name System



(DNS) Parameters registry:

/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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