Telechat Review of draft-ietf-core-cocoa-02

Request Review of draft-ietf-core-cocoa
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-03-06
Requested 2018-02-09
Authors Carsten Bormann, August Betzler, Carles Gomez, Ilker Demirkol
Draft last updated 2018-02-21
Completed reviews Tsvart Early review of -02 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -02 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -03 by Vincent Roca
Opsdir Telechat review of -03 by Scott Bradner
Tsvart Telechat review of -03 by Wesley Eddy
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Christer Holmberg
Assignment Reviewer Scott Bradner
State Completed
Review review-ietf-core-cocoa-02-opsdir-telechat-bradner-2018-02-21
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Serious Issues
Review completed: 2018-02-21


I have not reviewed this document in any detail but since it makes no reference to RFC 5033 (Specifying New Congestion Control Algorithms) I consider it to be fatally incomplete 

RFC 5033 is a BCP which in my opinion must (MUST?) be followed in any document that purports to define a new congestion protocol, even at the informational level.