Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-09
review-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-09-genart-telechat-korhonen-2017-02-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-03-14
Requested 2017-02-14
Authors Hao Long, Min Ye, Gregory Mirsky, Alessandro D'Alessandro, Himanshu Shah
Draft last updated 2017-02-21
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Mehmet Ersue (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-09-genart-telechat-korhonen-2017-02-21
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-02-21

Review
review-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-09-genart-telechat-korhonen-2017-02-21

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2017-02-21
IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16

Summary:

I have reviewed two earlier versions of this document. All my comments have been addressed. I am also happy to see my earlier comments generated (I believe) a draft addressing the generalized SCSI TLV specification work in TEAS, and this draft referencing to that work.

Major issues:

none.

Minor issues:

none.

Nits/editorial comments: 

There are minor editorials here and there, but those will be picked up by the RFC editor in any case.