Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14
review-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14-genart-lc-housley-2013-08-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-09-02
Requested 2013-08-22
Authors Fatai Zhang, Dan Li, Han Li, Sergio Belotti, Daniele Ceccarelli
Draft last updated 2013-08-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -14 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Steve Hanna (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14-genart-lc-housley-2013-08-24
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 15)
Review result Almost Ready
Review completed: 2013-08-24

Review
review-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14-genart-lc-housley-2013-08-24

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2013-08-23
IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-02
IESG Telechat date: Unknown

Summary:  The document is almost ready for publication as a
informational RFC.  I raise minor concerns that should be resolved
before IESG evaluation.

Minor Concerns:  

In section 3, there is a discussion that includes ODU0, ODU2e, and ODU4,
but these terms are not defined in the paragraph or in the terminology
section.  I realize that these are ODUj values, but ODUflex is an ODUj,
and it is included in the terminology section.

In section 3.1, OCh needs to be defined or at least expanded.

In section3.1.2.1, please expand MSI on first use.


Editorial:

In section 8: s/not requests/no requests/