Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14
review-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14-genart-lc-housley-2013-08-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-09-02 | |
| Requested | 2013-08-22 | |
| Authors | Fatai Zhang, Dan Li, Han Li, Sergio Belotti, Daniele Ceccarelli | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-08-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Russ Housley
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Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Steve Hanna (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14-genart-lc-housley-2013-08-24 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 14 (document currently at 15) | |
| Review result | Almost Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2013-08-24 |
Review
review-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14-genart-lc-housley-2013-08-24
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-g709-framework-14 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2013-08-23 IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-02 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as a informational RFC. I raise minor concerns that should be resolved before IESG evaluation. Minor Concerns: In section 3, there is a discussion that includes ODU0, ODU2e, and ODU4, but these terms are not defined in the paragraph or in the terminology section. I realize that these are ODUj values, but ODUflex is an ODUj, and it is included in the terminology section. In section 3.1, OCh needs to be defined or at least expanded. In section3.1.2.1, please expand MSI on first use. Editorial: In section 8: s/not requests/no requests/