Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-04
review-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-04-genart-lc-sparks-2015-09-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-09-09
Requested 2015-08-27
Draft last updated 2015-09-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Robert Sparks
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-04-genart-lc-sparks-2015-09-02
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Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-09-02

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-flexigrid-lambda-label-04
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2 Sep 2015
IETF LC End Date: 9 Sep 2015
IESG Telechat date: Not yet scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard



One thing I'd like to check, and I suspect this pokes at a conversation 


that has already happened (as hinted in the acknowledgements section):






The discussion of managements systems having to deal with a 64 bit 


wavelength label caught my eye. This is an RFC3471 section 3.2.1.1 label 


isn't it? That document shows wavelength labels as 32 bit things. Has 


something updated 3471 to say to expect a multiple of 32 bits, and not 


32 bits specifically? If not, maybe this document would be a good place 


to do so explicitly, rather than what appears to be fiat at the moment?






micro-nit: at the end of the introduction "in that regard" suggests the 


document updates the work of the ITU-T in some other regard? I suggest 


simple deleting the phrase.