Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-06
review-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-06-yangdoctors-lc-moberg-2018-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-05
Requested rev. 05 (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team YANG Doctors (yangdoctors)
Deadline 2018-12-07
Requested 2018-11-21
Requested by Daniele Ceccarelli
Draft last updated 2018-12-19
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Carl Moberg (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Shawn Emery (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Dan Romascanu
Comments
WG last call passed.
Assignment Reviewer Carl Moberg
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-06-yangdoctors-lc-moberg-2018-12-19
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-12-19

Review
review-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-06-yangdoctors-lc-moberg-2018-12-19

I have reviewed this document as part of the YANG doctors directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These 
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the 
IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews 
during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments 
just like any other last call comments. 

This document includes two YANG modules:
- ietf-alarms-x733@2018-11-22.yang
- ietf-alarms@2018-11-22.yang

..and an example YANG module:
- example-xyz-alarms.yang

The modules are valid, well-written, concise and provide ample documentation.

I have pointed out two small spelling errors in descriptive text, but will leave it to the editors to decide on the potential need for submitting a new version.