Last Call Review of draft-ietf-cbor-array-tags-07
review-ietf-cbor-array-tags-07-genart-lc-davies-2019-09-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-cbor-array-tags
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-09-05
Requested 2019-08-22
Authors Carsten Bormann
Draft last updated 2019-09-06
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Steve Hanna (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -07 by Henk Birkholz (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn Davies
State Completed
Review review-ietf-cbor-array-tags-07-genart-lc-davies-2019-09-06
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/aLkMDq1PALMSxQRiTgVkZAELRZE
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-09-06

Review
review-ietf-cbor-array-tags-07-genart-lc-davies-2019-09-06

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Document: draft-ietf-cbor-array-tags-07
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2019-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
Ready with a couple of nits.  Apologies for slightly late delivery.

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
None

Nits/editorial comments:
s1, para 2: s/have received/has received/

s1, para 3: s/This also can/This can also/

s1.1, last para: s/whether that/as to whether that/

s2.1, 2nd para after Table 2 (top of page 5): 
OLD:
     It can be computed
     inversely to the previous formula from the length of the byte string
     in bytes: "bytelength >> (f + ll)".
NEW:
     It can be computed from the length of the byte string comprising the 
     representation of the array by inverting the previous formula: "bytelength >> (f + ll)".
ENDS

s2.1: The terms endianness, big endian and litle endian are jargon, if pretty well known jargon, but I don't know if they are considered to be adequately well understood to avoid the need for a reference or  an explanation of what is meant.