Telechat Review of draft-ietf-capport-rfc7710bis-07
review-ietf-capport-rfc7710bis-07-iotdir-telechat-krishnan-2020-06-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-capport-rfc7710bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet of Things Directorate (iotdir)
Deadline 2020-06-09
Requested 2020-05-27
Requested by √Čric Vyncke
Authors Warren Kumari, Erik Kline
Draft last updated 2020-06-11
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tim Chown (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -07 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -07 by Ralf Weber (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-capport-rfc7710bis-07-iotdir-telechat-krishnan-2020-06-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/iot-directorate/6-_LrXi_gaRCh_TKd1ifYh97_2Q
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-06-11

Review
review-ietf-capport-rfc7710bis-07-iotdir-telechat-krishnan-2020-06-11

Overall I found the draft to be well written and easy to read but I one minor comment.

* It is not clear how a constrained device (potentially without a user interface) would handle the URI that it receives to escape the captive portal. Has this been thought of? I think some new text in this regard would be useful here, though one could make the case for this to be handled in the API draft instead.