Telechat Review of draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-02-20 | |
| Requested | 2018-02-08 | |
| Authors | Les Ginsberg, Tony Przygienda, Sam Aldrin, Zhaohui Zhang | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-02-20 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour
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Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Joe Clarke (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 06 (document currently at 11) | |
| Review result | Ready with Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2018-02-20 |
Review
review-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2018-02-20
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bier-isis-extensions-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-02-12 IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-22 ? IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -please updated references to latest draft version/RFC number -Section 2 would be clearer is the definitions introduced only in this document are identified as such -Please spell out multi topology, sub-domain at first use for MT SD -[Page 6], "advertisments."--->"advertisements" -[Page 8], "occurences"--->"occurrences" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com