Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bfd-yang-14
review-ietf-bfd-yang-14-secdir-lc-huitema-2018-06-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bfd-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-06-08
Requested 2018-05-25
Authors Reshad Rahman, Lianshu Zheng, Mahesh Jethanandani, Santosh Pallagatti, Gregory Mirsky
Draft last updated 2018-06-14
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -09 by Ravi Singh (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -09 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christian Huitema
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bfd-yang-14-secdir-lc-huitema-2018-06-14
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 17)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-06-14

Review
review-ietf-bfd-yang-14-secdir-lc-huitema-2018-06-14

I already reviewed version 9 of this draft. The changes since then include more precise syntax definitions, a list of examples, and an extended security section. The security extensions outline the issues with even read-only disclosure of sensitive information, which is a welcome addition to the draft. From a security point of view, this draft seems ready.