Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-08

Request Review of draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-base
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-04-12
Requested 2016-03-24
Authors Carlos Pignataro, David Ward, Nobo Akiya, Manav Bhatia, Santosh Pallagatti
Draft last updated 2016-03-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Shawn Emery (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-08-genart-lc-romascanu-2016-03-29
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-03-29


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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-base-09

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 2016/3/29

IETF LC End Date: 2016/4/12

IESG Telechat date: 2016/5/5


Summary: Ready


The document is well written and complete, but requires a good understanding of BFD (RFC 5880) and of the use-cases (draft-ietf-bfd-seamless-use-case) document. I raised three (no show-stopper) issues in my first review. Two of them let
 to clarification and editorial improvements in the text. The third one was clarified in the mail exchange with the authors and I agree that no change is acceptable.



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