Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-multicast-damping-04
review-ietf-bess-multicast-damping-04-genart-lc-halpern-2016-03-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-multicast-damping
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-04-13
Requested 2016-03-24
Authors Thomas Morin, Stephane Litkowski, Keyur Patel, Zhaohui Zhang, Robert Kebler, Jeffrey Haas
Draft last updated 2016-03-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Donald Eastlake (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-bess-multicast-damping-04-genart-lc-halpern-2016-03-28
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2016-03-28

Review
review-ietf-bess-multicast-damping-04-genart-lc-halpern-2016-03-28

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-multicast-damping-04
    Multicast VPN state damping
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-March-2016
IETF LC End Date: 13-April-2016
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a proposed standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:


    Given that section 6.2 says that this applies to Ethernet VPNs 


[RFC7117], it would seem useful to mention this in the introduction.