Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07
review-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2019-03-31-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2019-04-01 | |
| Requested | 2019-03-11 | |
| Draft last updated | 2019-03-31 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Acee Lindem
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Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Watson Ladd (diff) Genart Last Call review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jouni Korhonen |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2019-03-31 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 07 (document currently at 08) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2019-03-31 |
Review
review-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2019-03-31
I read the document and think it is ready. IDNits warnings and comments are easily/automatically fixed when new version is submitted. I only have few editorial nits/suggestions. * Section 5.1 says "Assuming the below specified network topology.." while it could also use an exact reference to Figure 1. * Section 5 is written so that it assumed the reader has already read Section 6. Maybe swapping Sections 5 and 6 order would make sense?