Last Call Review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06
review-ietf-babel-applicability-06-genart-lc-halpern-2019-06-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-07-04
Requested 2019-06-20
Authors Juliusz Chroboczek
Draft last updated 2019-06-24
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Sasha Vainshtein (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Sasha Vainshtein (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Scott Kelly (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-babel-applicability-06-genart-lc-halpern-2019-06-24
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/-I5rIUI-2PoD1wVcylnVYILDMfI
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-06-24

Review
review-ietf-babel-applicability-06-genart-lc-halpern-2019-06-24

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Document: draft-ietf-babel-applicability-06
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2019-06-24
IETF LC End Date: 2019-07-04
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
   In section 2.2, in talking about "metric M", if I have understood properly, I think it would be clearer if you referred to "metric value M".