Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rid-04
review-ietf-avtext-rid-04-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-08-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rid
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-08-12
Requested 2016-08-01
Draft last updated 2016-08-08
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jürgen Schönwälder
State Completed
Review review-ietf-avtext-rid-04-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-08-08
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-08-08

Review
review-ietf-avtext-rid-04-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-08-08

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not
addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG
review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
just like any other last call comments.

  Document: draft-ietf-avtext-rid-06
  Status: Ready

These two sentences below seem to need improvement ('... when the
encoding media' and 'that set of headers'):

   To avoid Maximum Transmission Unit (MTU) issues for
   the RTP packets, the header extension's size needs to be taken into
   account when the encoding media.  Note that set of header extensions
   included in the packet needs to be padded to the next 32-bit boundary
   [RFC5285].

The last paragraph in the IANA Considerations seems to be misplaced;
it is really about security considerations that the text in the
Security Considerations section is much better than the simple claim
that the SDES items never reveal privacy information. I suggest to
simply delete the last paragraph in the IANA Considerations section.

s/impelementors/implementors/

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