Telechat Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-vbr-audio-
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 04)|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
|Draft last updated||2011-11-01|
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Ben Campbell
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Ben Campbell
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Leif Johansson
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-vbr-audio-03 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2011-10-21 IETF LC End Date: 2011-10-24 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a BCP. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- section 1, paragraph 2: "...can be recognised with high accuracy…" That seems like a bit more than a "small amount of information" -- section 2, 1st paragraph: "… is already considered a hard problem" Who considers it? -- section 4, last paragraph: "It is, however, still expected…" Who expects it? -- section 6: It might be worth mentioning that this entire draft is about security.